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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The lines are quite busy in the photograph, which in no way detracts from it. You have the single, well lit bar running perpendicular to the dozen-or-so hangers, which makes it unique and easily focused-on. You also have the (what appears to be) metal pipe at the bottom right, which is the white bar's antagonist. If these two bars were the focus of the photograph, it would give the view two easily comparable objects that would balance the photograph.
The branding in the bottom left detracts from the picture because that is where all the lines are coming together, which naturally is there the viewer will finish their attention. Although it will make the branding much more viewable, it covers the horizon point, which means the photo no longer has a central 'coming together' point.
Overall, excellent subject to take a picture of, and your use of the camera is superb. A few technical flaws, but I like where you were going with this picture.
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