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Turkey? by jennystokes Turkey? by jennystokes
Another weird ........drawing.
Aquarelle and pencil
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Critique by WhatAreWE Aug 25, 2012, 8:44:19 AM
This work is asymmetrical which is very nice for the eyes, however some of the shading i feel specifically on the gray areas needs some work. The legs on the other hand are shaded very well with many different colors. Perhaps add a background because at this point it feels as though the picture is floating for none of it is leaving the page. Use the entire page to get a great full affect of depth and form. With all this said I feel that with just a little more work your piece could be placed into a portfolio that you would use when looking for jobs.
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SabakuNoShi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great idea for work :D
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jennystokes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much.
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SabakuNoShi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :)
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DaWonderer Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
good idea..

I like the lower part much..
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jennystokes Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Professional General Artist
Ha!
Thanx so much
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miirex Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You have a great talent.
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jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
I used to only do Traditional Art.......but somehow I got 'way-laid' with Photography.
Since putting a lot of my drawings on, I have had great 'feedback' like yours.
Making me want to start again.
Thank you so much.
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Funky turkey.
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jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
See what I mean about curves!!!!!!!!
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marcgosselin Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes, very curvy legs.
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