Shop Mobile More Submit  Join Login
Turkey? by jennystokes Turkey? by jennystokes
Another weird ........drawing.
Aquarelle and pencil
Add a Comment:
 
:iconwhatarewe:
Critique by WhatAreWE Aug 25, 2012, 8:44:19 AM
This work is asymmetrical which is very nice for the eyes, however some of the shading i feel specifically on the gray areas needs some work. The legs on the other hand are shaded very well with many different colors. Perhaps add a background because at this point it feels as though the picture is floating for none of it is leaving the page. Use the entire page to get a great full affect of depth and form. With all this said I feel that with just a little more work your piece could be placed into a portfolio that you would use when looking for jobs.
What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
2 out of 2 deviants thought this was fair.

The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork

Please sign up or login to post a critique.

:iconsabakunoshi:
SabakuNoShi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great idea for work :D
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much.
Hugs
Reply
:iconsabakunoshi:
SabakuNoShi Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure :)
Reply
:icondawonderer:
DaWonderer Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012
good idea..

I like the lower part much..
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2012  Professional General Artist
Ha!
Thanx so much
Reply
:iconmiirex:
miirex Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You have a great talent.
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
I used to only do Traditional Art.......but somehow I got 'way-laid' with Photography.
Since putting a lot of my drawings on, I have had great 'feedback' like yours.
Making me want to start again.
Thank you so much.
Hugs
Reply
:iconmarcgosselin:
marcgosselin Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Funky turkey.
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
See what I mean about curves!!!!!!!!
Hugs
Reply
:iconmarcgosselin:
marcgosselin Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Yes, very curvy legs.
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Reply
:iconmarcgosselin:
marcgosselin Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
My pleasure.
Reply
:iconleocervas:
Leocervas Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
LOl:XD: Jenny... You're so imaginative!:love:
Cool drawing !:aww:
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Over imaginative.........................sometimes I have NO idea where this comes from???
I start by drawing lines on a page and then see what I have got.
Thank you SO much me dear friend.
Hugs
Am sending you a note right now........about your photo
Reply
:iconkram666:
kram666 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012
:weed::weed::peace::weed::weed::peace::weed::weed:

very nice work Jenny :-)

“Think for yourself and question authority”
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanx my dearest Mark.
Hugs
Reply
:icontigles1artistry:
Tigles1Artistry Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WOW.... I love him.....:nod::nod::nod:
:iconbravoplz:
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you SO much my Dear Friend..........You are always so kind to me.
Hugs and xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Reply
:icontigles1artistry:
Tigles1Artistry Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
HugSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Reply
:iconherofan135:
herofan135 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really cool design! Love the soft colours aswell. :wow:
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you so much for your comment......I love drawing.
Hugs
Reply
:iconmartintinaz:
martintinaz Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Professional Photographer
:wow:MG...This is a wierd turkey but I love it my dear Jen...:iconclapplz:
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanx SO much.......have not done a drawing in ages....need to get back to it......
Thank you so much Martina.......
Hope you are well.
Hugs and xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Reply
:iconglorielfwings:
Glorielfwings Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love your little drawings!! :D :D :D :D It almost looks like something from a romanesque or gothic frieze
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
HA!
Thanx so much my dear friend.........intersting compliment.
Hugs and xxxxxxxxxxxx
Reply
:iconglorielfwings:
Glorielfwings Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:) Well, it was an interesting piece!! :) Love your little sketches, they are so creative!!! :)
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanx so much my dear old friend.
Hugs and xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Reply
:iconbeyzayildirim77:
beyzayildirim77 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
very nice work......!!!
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanx my dearest Beyza,,,,,,,,,,,
Saw a sweet pic from you today!
made me laugh.
Hugs and xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Reply
:iconbeyzayildirim77:
beyzayildirim77 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much..:)My Angel.
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Professional General Artist
Always MY pleasure for you and your work.
Hugs and xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Reply
:iconbark:
Bark Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Professional Writer
Very good!
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thanx Monsieur Barky...............
How are you?
Hugs
Reply
:iconbark:
Bark Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Professional Writer
Better! Hugs
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Professional General Artist
That's VERY good to hear.
GIANT Hugs
Reply
:iconvckyeg:
vckyeg Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
interesting. it's very creative. good job :)
Reply
:iconjennystokes:
jennystokes Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Professional General Artist
Thank you SO much.
Reply
Add a Comment:
 
×
  • Art Print
  • Canvas
  • Photo




Details

Submitted on
August 24, 2012
Image Size
2.5 MB
Resolution
2451×2643
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
278
Favourites
45 (who?)
Comments
37
×